30 สิงหาคม 2551

Guide to writing a Basic Essay

Write the Introduction and Conclusion
Your essay lacks only two paragraphs now: the introduction and the conclusion. These paragraphs will give the reader a point of entry to and a point of exit from your essay.
Introduction
The introduction should be designed to attract the reader's attention and give her an idea of the essay's focus.
1.Begin with an attention grabber.
The attention grabber you use is up to you, but here are some ideas:
-Startling informationThis information must be true and verifiable, and it doesn't need to be totally new to your readers. It could simply be a pertinent fact that explicitly illustrates the point you wish to make.If you use a piece of startling information, follow it with a sentence or two of elaboration.
-AnecdoteAn anecdote is a story that illustrates a point.Be sure your anecdote is short, to the point, and relevant to your topic. This can be a very effective opener for your essay, but use it carefully.
-DialogueAn appropriate dialogue does not have to identify the speakers, but the reader must understand the point you are trying to convey. Use only two or three exchanges between speakers to make your point.Follow dialogue with a sentence or two of elaboration.
-Summary InformationA few sentences explaining your topic in general terms can lead the reader gently to your thesis. Each sentence should become gradually more specific, until you reach your thesis.
2.If the attention grabber was only a sentence or two, add one or two more sentences that will lead the reader from your opening to your thesis statement.
3.Finish the paragraph with your thesis statement.
Conclusion
The conclusion brings closure to the reader, summing up your points or providing a final perspective on your topic.
All the conclusion needs is three or four strong sentences which do not need to follow any set formula. Simply review the main points (being careful not to restate them exactly) or briefly describe your feelings about the topic. Even an anecdote can end your essay in a useful way.
Write the Body Paragraphs
In the body of the essay, all the preparation up to this point comes to fruition. The topic you have chosen must now be explained, described, or argued.
Each main idea that you wrote down in your diagram or outline will become one of the body paragraphs. If you had three or four main ideas, you will have three or four body paragraphs.
Each body paragraph will have the same basic structure.
Start by writing down one of your main ideas, in sentence form.If your main idea is "reduces freeway congestion," you might say this:Public transportation reduces freeway congestion.
Next, write down each of your supporting points for that main idea, but leave four or five lines in between each point.
In the space under each point, write down some elaboration for that point.Elaboration can be further description or explanation or discussion.
Supporting Point
Commuters appreciate the cost savings of taking public transportation rather than driving.
Elaboration
Less driving time means less maintenance expense, such as oil changes.
Of course, less driving time means savings on gasoline as well.
In many cases, these savings amount to more than the cost of riding public transportation.
If you wish, include a summary sentence for each paragraph.This is not generally needed, however, and such sentences have a tendency to sound stilted, so be cautious about using them.
Once you have fleshed out each of your body paragraphs, one for each main point, you are ready to continue.

16 สิงหาคม 2551

The History (AKA Her-story) of Mother's Day


Celebrating motherhood is a historical tradition dating back almost as far as mothers themselves. A number of ancient cultures paid tribute to mothers as goddesses, including the ancient Greeks, who celebrated Rhea, the mother of all gods. The ancient Romans also honored their mother goddess, Cybele, in a notoriously rowdy springtime celebration and the Celtic Pagans marked the coming of spring with a fertility celebration linking their goddess Brigid together with the first milk of the ewes.
During the 17th century, those living on the British isles initiated a religious celebration of motherhood, called Mothering Sunday, which was held on the forth Sunday during the Lenten season. This holiday featured the reunification of mothers and their children, separated when working class families had to send off their young children to be employed as house servants. On Mothering Sunday, the child servants were allowed to return home for the day to visit with their parents. The holiday's popularity faded in the 19th century, only to be reincarnated during World War II when U.S. servicemen reintroduced the sentimental (and commercial) aspects of the celebration American counterpart.

15 สิงหาคม 2551

Should parents be responsible if their children behave badly?
Introduction
In social now, there are many crimes and social problems are caused by children. Parents are important to take care children. They should commit crimes are caused by social and friend.
Body
-There are many problems are caused by teenage. I disagree why father and mother must responsible for crimes commit by teenage children. Today they are independent and make their own decisions. They are expect to learn to take care of themselves. Who make mistake, we can not to tell family different or not.
- In now, parents are working so they can not watch their adolescent children all the time. Parents must make work hard for us. This is excuse for children behave badly. Such as children from good family can sometime commit crimes. Then to say juvenile make bad from each habit to different and by environment.
- There are many news about crimes which are caused by teenage. Such as have news about child is 18 years old to kill taxi driver is 54 years old at Jaransanitwong 77 in Bangkok. He is confess with police to tell he want follow game name GTA .It is problems at big for parents should be responsible. I think father and mother should close children and understand them.
Conclusion
So, children behave badly should be responsible for acts commit of themselves. They will think carefully before doing getting into trouble. Each family must act love and to know because will to solve for them.

04 สิงหาคม 2551

zoo

Are zoos cruel to wild animals?

A zoo is the habitation lives of a lot of wild animals, be the place takes care and conserve wild animals keep. But someone get back to think it is that injure wild animals.
Nowadays a human hunts animal both of for the business and are the food, make wild animals begins to become extinct. Then have a zoo happen, a zoo is the place helps to conserve animal keeps become extinct. There is building place that is like the nature, there is care alms well, there is the food regularly. Garden still is the recreational area for a family and are pleasing for the children , with regard to get lead animal comes in , in order to , get take care closely , protect hunting of a human . But someone think it is cruel place with wild animals because it have cage for wild animals.
However, a zoo is the place where has the care and protect wild animals well, make have descended from breed has next generation for to further study go to
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zoos

Are zoos cruel to wild animals?

A zoo is the habitation lives of a lot of wild animals, be the place takes care and conserve wild animals keep. But someone get back to think it is that injure wild animals.
Nowadays a human hunts animal both of for the business and are the food, make wild animals begins to become extinct. Then have a zoo happen, a zoo is the place helps to conserve animal keeps become extinct. There is building place that is like the nature, there is care alms well, there is the food regularly. Garden still is the recreational area for a family and are pleasing for the children , with regard to get lead animal comes in , in order to , get take care closely , protect hunting of a human . But someone think it is cruel place with wild animals because it have cage for wild animals.
However, a zoo is the place where has the care and protect wild animals well, make have descended from breed has next generation for to further study go to.